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Woah

It's actually pretty good. The only problem is the... mastering :/
Sure, it sounds much better than the first, you gotta admit that. The problem is that when everything comes in everything overlaps and it becomes a mess of sounds mashed into each other, and makes it hard to listen to.
Whenever there is a kick it goes over the sounds aswell, and the main melody overlaps with the bassline. Which makes it quite unconfortable to listen to on a good sound system. The bassline just goes over the background pads and that's kinda annoying aswell.
You should probably try to equalize each instrument so they don't overlap if you know what I mean. That'll be a great step.

Another reason why I'm giving you a 7 is because your melody is really repetitive. It is a simple melody and that is not a problem since sometimes the simplest melodies are the best. The thing is it's just the same, moved into different octaves and with different instruments, it's always the same notes all over again (even tough they're not nessesarly into the same order).

Overall, it's good, but boring to listen to after a while. You gotta improve your mastering and add another melody. Other than that, everything is really good. There's something really awesome in this song, I just don't know what.

6.5 (7) / 10, 3.25 (3) / 5
Good job, now take it to the next level :)

- lemon42

Darkfire96 responds:

Oh geez am I late XD
I actually plan on remastering this. Again :3
But I dont want to change much in this song because it was meant to be repetitive.
And although the same melody stays in the song throughout I think it added to the uniqueness of the song. The feeling of something simple and good to dance too. But if I were to actually be serious on this Ill definitely put another melody in. Try checking out some of my other songs :3

/-Ikarus-\

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Speechless.
Amazing piano intro. Just epic.
Then amazing lead pops in. Plays the epic melody.
Piano back in with some chords in the background. Dude. This song is just.. hum.. undescriptible!
Seriously, this is amazing work. Straight into favorites.
I had been amazed by the original song. The fact you got it to be awesome without using any wobble bass at all is just outstanding.

- lemon42

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Thanks:3
Glad you thought it was awesome.

It's...

Amazing!
Really! Just epic. I loved the melodies. The fact that it was made almost entirely using 3xOsc is quite impressive since the synths sound really professional, for real! Just amazing. Enough said, this song is pretty epic. I'd love to see an extended version!

- lemon42

Jebbal responds:

I'm glad you liked it so much! Haha yeah 3xOsc has been my tool of choice for a while now. You just gotta keep tweaking and mixing, you can get some really awesome sounds out of it by itself! And I have actually been considering extending this song a minute or two... we'll see.

Thanks for the review!

Impressive.

This piece is amazingly well written. Kudos to the songwriters.
You did an extremely good job remixing it. I'm not a particular fan of Trance, but this is amazing. Thanks a lot.
Anyway, like Himynameisjacob said, this is really well produced, and that's probably the hardest part of composition, but yet I find some stuff could be added. Thus my 9.
That said I hope to hear more from you.

- lemon42

Epic!

I don't know what to say. This song has astonished me.
The song itself blends epic melodies, with a really nice lead, some chords which are perfect and some piano aswell, with a hard beat on top.
I'm just stunned just by hearing the way the melodies just fit in so well. Thanks for making this. Really.

- lemon42

Awesome.

Wow. Just wow.
I've been amazed by everything. The lead. The chords. Everything.
You made my day. Thanks.
Like coocooletmoi said, this song tries to keep you interested and it does that very nicely. I've listening it for a while and now I just can't stop! It's addictive, highly addictive! This song is just unbelievable. This would be epicness in a can. Whenever you open that can the epicness goes through your ears and you can hear this. A masterpiece, really. Just one thing to say: was repetitive, but yet this song is so amazing I hardly noticed.

- lemon42

Cool, but could be better

That was a nice one.
The lead was good, along with the rest. There was a cool mix between electro house and dubstep wobbles there. Really liked it.
"no that good"? You kidding me? You've got great potential! The only problem is your beat. It's just a bit dull. If you made it kick more, that'd be awesome.
Oh yeah, one more thing, work on your mastering a bit. Some instruments didn't blend in with others at times in the song, for example when almost everything was playing. Other than that I find this track amazing.
Favorited! Keep it up!

- lemon42

Simple yet amazing

That's a really cool song you got there. It's smooth yet keeps you intrigued because it makes you want to listen to it, like if it was a story and you could just not stop reading it until you knew the end.
I'd say the combination of 8-bit and piano is just really awesome. Really.
Make more, thanks!
Will be looking out for your songs.

- lemon42

Talented.

This is a really smooth and nice piece.
Totally worth listening.
Relaxing, nice arrangements, slow piece overall.
Now, add some strings in the background and make a full orchestral song, that would we really nice.
Thanks for making this, really calming. Someone had pissed me off earlier, now I feel good. Thanks again.

- lemon42

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